Unicorn Trainer

All righty! Time for a critique!


The first thing I thought of when I saw this was “Wow, what a beautiful play of white!” Those hues are so very nicely brought together to make an enchanting scene, and I love the concept of this, too, as well as the overall feeling of this. One could just write an entire story based on this picture!

For the "trainer", I don't really have anything to complain about. But for the front unicorn, it would really make the image better if you tilted its horn to get more of a 90 degree angle from that to the face, to make it look more natural. And if you lowered the horn's opacity and blurred it a bit, it would blend in better, as it seems to stick out a bit "stiffly".

However, I just LOVE the background you made! You blend and merge different background stocks together so seamlessly...good job! The only thing I would probably suggest here is to use a bit more blur on the overhead branches of the tree, as it steals some of the attention from the main subject. Also, if the unicorn (the one in the front) could have a more clearly defined grounding (such as the shadow), it would make this picture-perfect! ^-^


All in all, this is beautiful work. Keep up the good work, and you will most certainly improve!


*MaidenStar
_{(Note: if I sound too blunt or hard on your work, then just ignore me! This is merely my own personal judgment, and you don't have to subject to my reasonings.)}